apatheticdays

I was trying to make a poppy song... i dunno... not done quite yet


Turn it around
Make it sound
Like a new song
Play it fast
then play it slow
then play it backward
Sing along
Or dance with me
Make your choice

I am open to suggestions... it needs some work

This dream feels so real
It's like I cut the air and entered the past
These moments they hurt
Worse than they hurt before

I'm drowning in these tears
While desprately holding my breath
Make me wake up
So this scene will vanish
Take  it away

The words they are replaying
Over and over again
I can still here you saying
them over and over again

I'm drowning in these tears
While desprately holding my breath
Make me wake up
So this scene will vanish
Take  it away

Wake me up from this dream
It's hurting me, burning me
The very words are cutting me
Wake me up

I'm drowning in these tears
While desprately holding my breath
Make me wake up
So this scene will vanish
Take  it away

I'm drowning drowning drowning drowning
I'm drowning drownign drowning drowning
Wake me up


   

I hope you can fogive me for what i say
But the feeling of hate is growing everyday
I close my eyes and picture you fading away
fading away, fade away

I'm angry, i'm hurt and i'm dealing in the wrong ways
They see it, they feel it, they taste my pain
They don't say it straight to my face
But they all think i'm a mental case

CHORUS
You, you caused this
You, you, brought this
You, you, gave this to me
You, you, hurt me
You, you, haunt me
You, you, endangered me

HOw can i tell you exactly what you did
You ruined me, and destroyed my only friend
I different, i'm changing and it's all because of you
Because you, it cause of you

Yes CHORUS x2

endangered me

It isn't finished... and it isn't done. it really needs work.
  i don't even know if endangered goes!

I just wrote like ten other possiblities and will be posting them soon. This one is one of them.

With every breath you took
Your whole body shook
And you closed your eyes
As you silently screamed inside
And you tried to grab anything
Trying to find something comforting
And as I held your hand and held back a tear
I couldn't restrain my biggest fear

Oh... oh.. oh (Choir)

With every tear of yours that fell
Something inside me burned like hell
And as you lay there drenched in your blood
The tears were starting to flood
And my brave act that I put on
Was finally crumbling off
And was replaced by a being
That couldn't stop seeing

That it was my fault
That I was to blame
That I caused your pain
And it's making me go insane
That it was my fault
That I was to blame
Now I'm going insane
Cause I caused your pain

(Choir )

That it was my fault
That I was to blame
That I caused your pain
And it's making me go insane
That it was my fault
That I was to blame
Now I'm going insane
Cause I caused your pain

With every breath you took
My whole body shook
And as you closed your eyes
I slightly screamed inside

Not finished, I basically couldn't write it cause I started breaking down.yah, long story. not a happy ending.
I have a chorus ready but you know... couldn't find it. This is the first verse

With every breath you took
Your whole body shook
And you closed your eyes
As you silently screamed inside
And you tried to grab everything
Trying to find something comforting
And as I held your hand and held back a tear
I couldn't restrain my biggest fear